BookRix

Very funny stuff here.Loved it!

Okay you've got me scratching my head over this one. Where exactly did Laz fall from? For Laz to fall with such force, well this could only happen in a story. I've got it, he must be like the cartoon figure Gumby.
I have to say this for you, I am always surprised, and entertained by your writing.

You had me at "He hit the ground...".

What a sense of humor you have, Patrick!

This was so good, Pat! You had me laughing many a time, especially during the congregation at the end. But I've come to expect no less from you. Very well done Pat (or should I say Felix?). Definitely a favourite for me :D

I am only sorry Laz, didn't have someone nicer than me for the target of his affections. He has assured me however, that he is happy with the cast. I think he's being kind :-)

You've written this with wit and aplomb. I didn't expect anything less from Patrick Sean Lee, the writer.

There were so many funny moments, I can't really mention them here, but I wanted to say, I love this style of wit; inconspicuous with a large dose of irony.

Thank you for the auburn hair and the big brown eyes, but most of all thank you for the flat stomach. It's been along time since i had one of those.

Bless you, Mr Lee. Love you lots and lots.
xxx

P.s Don't want to spoil your story, because 'Reakes' sounding like 'peaks' works so much better in so many ways....but it's Reakes, sounding like brakes; a somerset name. Before that I was Lyttle, sounding like brittle and my maiden name was Vaughan sounding like horn. I may even have a few more somewhere.xxxxxxxxxxx

I'm dissapointed. You stopped the story way too soon. I was waiting for more descriptive antics.
Oh, what the heck...it is very well written at you- know- who's expense...lol.
PS...I'll get you for this.

I could compete with that. wonderful story. Besides, I love laughing at Lazarus's expense. No offence Laz, but this was fun to read.

I'm feeling kinda left out! You always leave me scratching my head. I always like it I just have to read it twice sometimes. I think it's an Oklahoma thing!

This contest is going to be sooooo good. It's funny, charming, hilarious. Nicely done.

Oh Pat... where do you come UP with these ideas???

So funny, this one...

...though I'm sad that I didn't make it in... :(