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I suppose I saw the cover and then I saw the cover again...and again...and that'w when it dawned on me that it's an 'installment' deal! Now I'm off to read II!

This is really a great start. Do you have move up yet? I like the first person narrative. Very nicely done!

I read the most current installment first, so I had to come here and start at the beginning. Wonderful writing, smooth, easy flow and great characters. I love Munster. Pat, you left us hanging perfectly, waiting to see what happens next. I will, without a doubt, work my way through all of your excerpts, in order this time!

Always well written, I enjoyed this one because you did such an accurate voice of a child. Your descriptions are always spot-on! Never have pages turned so fast, now on to book two!

Hi Patrick,
I really love your stories. I love the way you write about children and their view of the world.
Best wishes, DublinerTinte

This scenario would be one of my worse nightmares. Please, message me if/when you extend it.
I have left you my heart & vote for this story.
Chris

Nice...end of a world type of tale.
Glad there are no zombies so far.
It would have been nice if you could've somehow given us a clue/name at the start so we could have known that the protagonist was female...but not a big deal. I like the story, and waiting to see how it develops.

Good start. I think you have captured the voice of the young children, which isn't an easy thing to do. I will keep reading since i want to know what happened to cause so many to die, and how did these young children escape deaths grip?

And Greg. Thanks, Mary. Names in the final draft are easy to change, and so I will:)
Dear Val, Tonya, and Jenna. Thanks so much. Sustaining the voice for 50-60,000 words will be a challenge, but as I mentioned this morning at SW in a post on dialogue; in the end it will be the story that makes or breaks it.