Closer To Heaven

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Closer To Heaven
A disaster has struck the earth. Four children remain, and they have no idea what caused everyone except themselves to perish. They must make their way in a new land where bodies are rotting, unknown dangers might lurk in the shadows, and in an existence with no parental or community guidance.
But, besides themselves, someone else has survived. The question arises: Is this someone a monster, or is he to become their moral compass?

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Apocalypse
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Joyful

Well done Patrick!!! I so enjoyed every minute with your characters and the journey they took me on with them.

Thank you,
Susan

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felixthecat

Thank you so much, Susan!

Joyful

I enjoy becoming Amelia....smiles

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Crystal_

wow that was an awesome story!!!!

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felixthecat

Ohmagosh, Crystal! THAT was the original book I wrote for my grandchildren (around 8-9 years old) back in...geez, when was it??? A few years ago, anyway.

Two of my writing partners said, "You CAN'T leave Munster out of the story until the very end. Revise the plot and put him... mehr anzeigen

Dreams of Shadows. The Amelia Chronicles, Book 1 https://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-patrick-sean-lee-dreams-of-shadows/ Christmastime, 2017. With a sudden, nuclear-like flash of light, the population of the planet is decimated. Every living human, save one Amelia McDougal, a 15 year old girl living in Marysville, ...
Crystal_

your welcom!!!

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J. B. Jones

Outstanding story; satisfying in every respect (save not learning the contents of the Big Black Box, you tease)

I love mining this site and discovering diamonds like this.

Your imagination and voice made my day.

Thanks!

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felixthecat

Thanks, Jones. My critique group said, "Patrick, you MUST revise; get Munster back into the story early on!" I began a new draft, but never completed the second version. I always rather liked the first anyway, which is posted here.

Regarding the black box. I intended to leave the... mehr anzeigen

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neha.katyal

This is a really interesting piece :)

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felixthecat

Thanks:)
I patterned it VERY LOOSELY on Mark Haddon's marvelous book, "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time". Not sure if it's YA, Literary, Mainstream...just what it is, but quite a few readers wanted me to inject romance; the book being YA (if it in fact is).... mehr anzeigen

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linnreights

I'll stop by and read Closer to Heaven from time to time...I really enjoyed what I've read so far...:-)...Linn

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felixthecat

:) Thank you!

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