Well done Patrick!!! I so enjoyed every minute with your characters and the journey they took me on with them.
Thank you,
Susan
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wow that was an awesome story!!!!
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Ohmagosh, Crystal! THAT was the original book I wrote for my grandchildren (around 8-9 years old) back in...geez, when was it??? A few years ago, anyway.
Two of my writing partners said, "You CAN'T leave Munster out of the story until the very end. Revise the plot and put him... mehr anzeigen
your welcom!!!
Wow amazing story! I love it!
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:) Thanks, Dysis :)
Outstanding story; satisfying in every respect (save not learning the contents of the Big Black Box, you tease)
I love mining this site and discovering diamonds like this.
Your imagination and voice made my day.
Thanks!
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Thanks, Jones. My critique group said, "Patrick, you MUST revise; get Munster back into the story early on!" I began a new draft, but never completed the second version. I always rather liked the first anyway, which is posted here.
Regarding the black box. I intended to leave the... mehr anzeigen
This is a really interesting piece :)
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Thanks:)
I patterned it VERY LOOSELY on Mark Haddon's marvelous book, "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time". Not sure if it's YA, Literary, Mainstream...just what it is, but quite a few readers wanted me to inject romance; the book being YA (if it in fact is).... mehr anzeigen
:-)..i'm really drawn to this book..lol
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I'll stop by and read Closer to Heaven from time to time...I really enjoyed what I've read so far...:-)...Linn
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:) Thank you!
Thank you so much, Susan!
I enjoy becoming Amelia....smiles
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