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You published this in 2012? I don't remember reading it. In any event, good job. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

"...Think, stupid. Think!..." Finally stopped laughing, but now my face hurts - the mental image...! You get the Master of Hysterically Funny Inspirations Award for that one! "D

Very cute

This story is very amusing and entertaining. I like the parts where Ghost digs his claws in too deep and where he scares the sparrows. Lol! The whole idea of presenting the Holy Trinity, in the process of creating humans, is genius. You demonstrate an abundance of knowledge in chemistry. Very cute little tale.

Very funny. Totally worth the read.

You sir never cease to amaze me. This was witty and clever and intelligently funny. I would look around and enter it into contests because I think it has a good chance at winning.

That was the funniest story I have ever read about Adam and Eve. You drew all the characters well.

have a way with this form of writing. I loved it! What an imagination and the concept of them pondering the stomach of all things. That rascally snake!

Lighthearted and imaginative. It had me smiling the whole way through, with the Creator trying to figure out how to make things work in his creations.

Cute story!