The Cracked Orchid

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The Cracked Orchid
Lenny and Abby walk the decaying earth alone and confused. Abby’s strange visions are leading them somewhere, but their source remains a mystery.

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rena1234

omg what a good book a i enjoyed reading it

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jendaz0

Beautiful story. My heart was being ripped apart with confusing emotion's. Utter doomed sadness and complete overwhelming joy at the same time. A piece of perfection, loved every word.

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bree1621

Oh My Sweet Cherry Pie. AMAZING Book. No Words Can Describe It. Veryy Well Written And Descripitive. I Could Feel What Lenny Was Going Through As he Lost His Daughter. And I'm A Girl. Very Very Much Commendment. AMAZING.

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madrock

I felt him as he walked with his daughter and then alone. Your work allowed the reader to completely follow him with his vision and his feelings. Fantastic!

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brooke672

This is really good- I don't have time to finish but I will come back and read some more of your stories! You are really talented :D

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paulashene

read this story until you won the contest but it has spurred me on to read your other books.

This is an outstanding writing.

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peterpiper

An amazing story! The character’s emotion wasn’t only narrated, but it was beautifully shown. You have the talent to write a good novel. Keep it up!

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tina2010

This is a well-written short story. You have a realistic concept, but it was beautifully illustrated. The narration and dialogues were good. For me, you deserve to be in the top ten. Thumbs up!

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