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omg what a good book a i enjoyed reading it
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Beautiful story. My heart was being ripped apart with confusing emotion's. Utter doomed sadness and complete overwhelming joy at the same time. A piece of perfection, loved every word.
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Oh My Sweet Cherry Pie. AMAZING Book. No Words Can Describe It. Veryy Well Written And Descripitive. I Could Feel What Lenny Was Going Through As he Lost His Daughter. And I'm A Girl. Very Very Much Commendment. AMAZING.
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I felt him as he walked with his daughter and then alone. Your work allowed the reader to completely follow him with his vision and his feelings. Fantastic!
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This is really good- I don't have time to finish but I will come back and read some more of your stories! You are really talented :D
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read this story until you won the contest but it has spurred me on to read your other books.
This is an outstanding writing.
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You have a nice style about you.
Well done for this
Wendyxx
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An amazing story! The character’s emotion wasn’t only narrated, but it was beautifully shown. You have the talent to write a good novel. Keep it up!
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This is a well-written short story. You have a realistic concept, but it was beautifully illustrated. The narration and dialogues were good. For me, you deserve to be in the top ten. Thumbs up!
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