You're only 23?? You're wise beyond your years! This is a great story, and you do a good job of making the characters feel real.
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really loved this book very good book
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If I could give you more than one vote I absolutely would. This story is amazing. xx
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There is a quality to your narrative and plot development that few writers here...or anywhere...can match, Patrick. Not only is the story excellent--the tension palpable, the nearly-insane love of Eliot for Renae--the way you constructed it is dead-on perfect. Your use of the short sentence for impact throughout. Loved it!
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Patrick, I am not doubting you are only twenty-three years of age (well, maybe I am)- because the quality of your writing never falters, it only gets better and better.
Once more you have written a superb story that is exactly the theme of this contest - a bad romance. And bad it is.
You have not only engaged us with a knuckle-whitening plot, but you have filled our senses with such fabulous descriptive phrases that I am... mehr anzeigen
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That was AMAZING. Well written as always, and it was so easy to get into Eliot's head, to see the situation through his eyes! Good job!
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