In the Shackles of Love

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In the Shackles of Love
Eliot and Renae's relationship is off to a fantastic start. They are young. Happy. Then a single revelation produces frightening consequences, and they both realize just how little they know about each other.

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gooduklady

If I could give you more than one vote I absolutely would. This story is amazing. xx

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felixthecat

There is a quality to your narrative and plot development that few writers here...or anywhere...can match, Patrick. Not only is the story excellent--the tension palpable, the nearly-insane love of Eliot for Renae--the way you constructed it is dead-on perfect. Your use of the short sentence for impact throughout. Loved it!

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gooduklady

Patrick, I am not doubting you are only twenty-three years of age (well, maybe I am)- because the quality of your writing never falters, it only gets better and better.

Once more you have written a superb story that is exactly the theme of this contest - a bad romance. And bad it is.

You have not only engaged us with a knuckle-whitening plot, but you have filled our senses with such fabulous descriptive phrases that I am... mehr anzeigen

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Gelöschter User

That was AMAZING. Well written as always, and it was so easy to get into Eliot's head, to see the situation through his eyes! Good job!

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