BookRix

Another great story definitely pulled at my heartstrings. Smooth and well written, thanks for this story. Serena

I was impressed with your style. Excellent writing with good grammar and well construction scenes.

You do a superb job of capturing gut wrenching emotions with a touch of prose here and there. You write fresh images with creative groupings of words.

As far as quality of writing, I felt you were the best in the group of contestants. Story had a definite moral. You just lost me in the description of the message. Just a tad to long for me. But..remember I'm only one person. Overall you are an extremely mature and well polished writer. Thank you for sharing this. Robynn

As usual, you never fail to please. This is an exceptional story and written very well indeed. Seriously, are you really only 22 years old? You wrote a winner with The Cracked Orchid, and I do believe you have another with this thought-provoking entry.