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Very cool Lyrik. But sometimes it seems to be, that you are tired of life or that you have been used in your life.
It was really awesome to read. Your Gramma is clear but your thoughts are sometimes made of poison.
But @ the end I liked it very much. Keep doing this stuff.

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Veritas

of spirit!

Love the poems. You've got a great sense of imagery and language, and a rock-star kind of sensibility about life (depressed, but beautiful about it) that makes your work very interesting to read. My favorite turn of phrase ever is 'tick, talk' from "Prison." I'd like to see you explore some other subject matter, but other than that... great poetry. Your dedication to the words is evident.

There's a reason why you get all these great feedbacks.You are such a gifted writer! I truely hope you know that. Your poems were beautiful and I hope one day I can write as well as you do. I cannot wait to read more of your writing.

~Cheyenne X)

really great poems

Your poetry is very touching. I love the way you pull your words together. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

Really good, well-written poetry is so hard to find, but I just found some. Wow. Normally, the poetry that deals with personal pain and sorrow becomes self-indulgent, depressing, and (quite frankly) boring. Yours, on the other hand, deals with such issues but you write like the true poets I studied in school, the classic writers of the genre, and rather than bore or depress, your work makes the reader think and relate. You have a rare gift, and I hope you continue to use it well. To use an over-worked word, but one that is ever so fitting, AWESOME.

"Dismayed that you hold my tongue to your standards..."
Sometimes a line in a poem just leaps and grabs you. And won't let go.

An excellent collection, an individual voice. Congrats!

wow i really really really really like swallow.