Alienation from the world around them is captured well in this tale.
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Embellishment is not needed when the right phrases are woven in a strong word tapestry.
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great story voted and really enjoyed it
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You got a vote from me. Very well written. And the words made me see and feel everything that was going on. Very good and made me wanting more : )
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I love the line "Keep your eyes closed and your fears open" Good writing./joeparente vote and star
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Your view of things is pretty much how I feel. I love your style. Look forward to reading more!
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Back in the '60s and early '70s we used to write warning pieces like this, and then everyone fell asleep again. Great wake-up call! Simple and effective, well-written. Got my vote - hope you write lots more!
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