Mind Blowing short stories are collection of amazing stories, reading these stories will really lit up your day. it is everything you would see in a nobel laurate book.
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Your story has good bones. You have an underdog protagonist with a desire and a colorful cast of characters. The setting is great. I would recommend another re-write to clean up the mechanics. Look for errors like missing words, poor syntax, and confusing/too wordy sentences.
