There's a Vampire At My School

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There's a Vampire At My School
Taylor finds out there's a vampire at her school, no teacher knows. What will Taylor do to stop the vampire but what if she doesn't do anything?

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emecutie

to short. why a short story.you can make it longer by puting in more details.also great short story

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l.vamp

Ok I liked it, but you should add more details and make the parts last longer and don't skip ahead to another part without saying it. If you revise it, you could end up with a really great book ;)

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