I'm a big Supernatural fan, so I'm looking forward to reading this.
However, I think you need to mention it's a fanfiction and that credit goes to the creators of the show. You should put it in the blurb :P
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is being featured in the new YoungWriters contest.
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Wow. I absolutely loved this piece. Not only does it combine fantasy and a real-world image, but you also display your characters colorfully - they are alive and interactive. The storyline flows smoothly, and you keep the reader's attention up to the end.
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I'm thrilled that you like it! I decided to break it up into books about each Hunt. This is the whole story, which I almost titled "Crossroad Blues," but decided on "Ares." Next, is my book "Croatoan."
For more info on Skinwalkers, I started a discussion in the "Science Fiction/Fantasy Writers" group.
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Review - You writing is very mature for your age. This is a good thing! Liked how you built your characters. Gave your Skinwalker attitude, but intelligence. Did a nice job of making Sam and Dean's personalities different and distinct.
You created interest, such as what is a Skinwalker, what's her history with Dean and what will they run into next?
This is your art, and you are good. I'm not an editor, just an avid reader.... mehr anzeigen
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Thanks! I'm what you could call addicted to "Supernatural," so I know the boys' personalities pretty well. Fitting Ares in was the real challenge!
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I've read a lot of fan fiction, and most of it is a poor attempt at being compatible with the real thing. Yours, however, is well-worded, your dialogues are excellent, and you definitely have captured the personalities and flavor of the series. Great job - I look forward to reading more!
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It's really good so far, i'd love for you to write more! The background makes it more interesting and it sounds like you have a nice plot.
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i agree. but it is really great
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