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I love wolves i think they should not be killed they are amazing

I think you've shown great imagination with this story! Just keep writing and reading and editing. It's also good to ask others to have a look specifically for grammar and spelling corrections.

Blurb changes - he find(s) a new home; key to their survival

so so so so so jealous -_-
so so so so so good at battle scenes
-bear and storm's mom
so so so so so lucky you know more smart vocab then me :P I MEAN I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT THE WORD FEEBLY! GOTTA WRITE THAT DOWN!
ps: so so so so AWESOME!
PPS: WRITE MORE!

put more book up! rawyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

U bettr put more on!!!!!!!!!!! It wuz really good