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A really, really good story so far. I like how you defined the shadows and how they negatively affect the humans. You gave them intriguing lives and an insightful history and how tension exists between them and the lights. You created strong character in Luna and have placed her in an interesting position in the story. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you, im glad you enjoyed it! :)
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