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I enjoy your writing style. It's touching, but has a funny edge to it.

Thanks. Appreciate the comment. Inclined to agree that use of the word "contagion" might be out of reach for a child, even a precocious one. I thought about working around that a bit when I wrote it, but I guess I decided to move on. I'll take another look. Thanks again.

Is a wonderful short story. Well told from a child's viewpoint (excepting the reference to contagion, I found that out of character). Nice work, deserving of more attention.

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian