Some kind of nightmare

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User: AvennGed1
Some kind of nightmare
Life is mundane, humanity has always set out to find excitement wherever it may lie. Whether it’s falling through the sky or diving to deeper depths, we will find it. Society is nothing but a bore, if only life was anything like it used to be when there were no massive civilizations. Hunting, fighting everyday just to survive, that’s the life he’s looking for. A life of fulfillment, because surviving is the most fulfilling thing there is.

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First off, I want to commend you for the blurb, which made me interested innitially. Also, you have a very mature, empathetic, and vivid writing style. I can't wait to see what the rest of the story brings... Very interesting.

~Sabrina Jade~

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AvennGed1

Yes Im currently writing more right now, and the first part was already partially rewrote i just havent updated it yet. Thanks for the feed back.

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RebeckDawn

I really like your intro, it sets the mood for an interesting storyline, but then the first part jumps in so fast it's hard to keep up. are you going to write more?

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