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I just think that you should pay a little more attention to grammar. But otherwise it was pretty good.

THAT BOOK WAS NOT GOOD AT ALL IT REALLY HAD NO MEANING AT ALL SO MANY MISPELLED WORDS YOU SHOULD SPELL CHECK BEFORE PEOPLE READ YOUR WORK

ok so mrsbruister you had nothing positive to say about it like seriously when you comment you could at least put one good thing

This could be something way better. You should take the time and elaborate on the scenes like scottallen said. And there are a lot of spelling and grammar errors.

yo!! i liked it

I enjoyed this story -- sad that it's all too common in reality. The dialog rang really true. I actually wanted it to be a little longer -- some of the scenes felt like they were only just long enough to cover the essential dialog, whereas in reality there's always a little more -- "Yo, what's up dog?", etc.