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Thanks DHolm, I shall look at the font size again. Sorry about that!

This is a good beginning, but very hard to read with the font size so small. I don't have any major complaints about the structure and characters. Started with a bang and the characters are interesting. So this would be something I would buy and I don't think I can give higher praise than that. There are a few rough places concerning grammar and punctuation; a few awkwardly worded sentences, but these are only minor details. I'll pass you a few of my notes privately. Gave you a vote and wish you all the best with getting this published.
Denna