the vampire war part one

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the vampire war part one
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andrewn05

Hi,
I have an offer related to writing story and I'd like to talk about it.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.

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LoneWolfGaming131

READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left... mehr anzeigen

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danielle.burnett

It is a good start but it has a lot of incorrect grammar and spelling. It seems like a good Sci-Fi/Fantasy. I wouldn't mind a little more detail but I like it. Brava, Brava, Bravissima!

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