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it all happens to fast and is hard to follow.
kind of sounds like a myth from a native american tribe

it seems good but i dont understand how she thinks its a curse. you should type longer chapters.

--- blossomgirl74

it seems good but i dont understand how she thinks its a curse. you should type longer chapters.

--- blossomgirl74

thanks for the tip

I just read your story and it's beautiful. You need to go back and capitalize Rain because it the name of the girl. It would be easier to read also if you would use a new paragraph. Also do a spell check and read over carefully. Good luck on this.