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I LOVED IT
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it was really good :) but... again, add a little more depth. you skipped the entire scene with him asking her name. and then the part where he asked her where she lived and then asked her if she wanted to stay in the castle since she doesn't have anywhere to stay. then go on from there. it's a little chopy in some places but it's really good.
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Like I said I like Mulan :) And Little Mermaid the prince on this fairy tale is haaaaawt!!!! :)
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