*the little mermaid

this is a story about a girl who wants to become a human* her name is ariel Von:
*the little mermaid
youll love this story

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jowel afara

its like too small and stolen -_-

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Zariah

True it may be copied but at least it was changed up a bit and there is a part 2 coming so please try not to be negative

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Gelöschter User

I LOVE the fairy tale but I have some complaints that are really not mean.

You should correct spelling. Use Google Chrome or something that gives spelling corrects.

I don't mind the smiley faces but you should add feelings.

Try not to use symbols like (,*= ~ unless necessarily.

Capitalization needs fixed. No biggy. Just go over your book to find mistakes.

Give credit to the original creator of The Little Mermaid movie. I don't... mehr anzeigen

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Zariah

Same, you understand me.

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