What a sweet and wonderful story! For someone whose native language isn't English, you did a marvelous job of translating it, and even with the differences in syntax, you managed to make the tale easy to read and desirable to finish. This would be beautiful in any language, as it not only reveals a good heart, but has a very wise moral at the end.
Great job!
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This could use some work with syntax and grammar and spelling but it was a very cute story :D good job.
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thanks judycoella. Im very happy that you like it.