Not even death could do us apart

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User: tunist
Not even death could do us apart
lucin is devastated by the lost of her husband,cal.afters weeks of feeling numb she finally has a chance to bring him back to life using Black magic.

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love, death, zombies
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tunist

it was kinda rush.i knew it had alot of spelling mistakes but i didn't have time to fix it i was busy

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felixthecat

The moral of the story should be, Don't kick a gift ghoul in the teeth!

Alrighty...oddly enough I understood everything about this absolutely delightfully morbid story :) That said, I would suggest that you do an overhaul of all the basics of composition. I say that kindly...you could have a very competitive Flash entry, but to be taken seriously in any writing contest, you must have nearly letter-perfect prose, punctuation,... mehr anzeigen

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