it was kinda rush.i knew it had alot of spelling mistakes but i didn't have time to fix it i was busy
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Very vivid imagery. Keep up the good work.
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The moral of the story should be, Don't kick a gift ghoul in the teeth!
Alrighty...oddly enough I understood everything about this absolutely delightfully morbid story :) That said, I would suggest that you do an overhaul of all the basics of composition. I say that kindly...you could have a very competitive Flash entry, but to be taken seriously in any writing contest, you must have nearly letter-perfect prose, punctuation,... mehr anzeigen
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