BookRix

i think you made it to the top weirdestly nice book if there is ever quite a category like dat i do believe your story would lead it.

I love it!
Great characters and plot and a unique story line.All that and funny too.
Have a heart!

interesting book

Another short story which i wish i could write a short story as well as this. I didn't take any offense by the story at all. It was funny. Of course everyone feels bad for Norisse, but if you think about it Billiam is to blame. If he hadn't said a word Norisse would be alive, but he would still be married. The King was only sparing his daughter of humiliation, and pulled a Red Queen haha

The king is an ass!

Interesting... I felt it was a little snarky instead of tonuge and cheek. So it's true... It's good to be King

Different, but in a good way. I felt bad for Norisse. But besides that the book was good too.

Different ... to say the least.

After re-reading your tale, I am impressed by your storytelling ability. You spin a yarn so eloquently. I felt sad for Norisse, as I wished for her a happy ending. However, your language is lovely and your wit is highly intact. Fantastic job, Barry! Best wishes in the contest!

short but very interesting i liked it