Barry Carver is a master ! The way you tell stories , especiacially with surprise endings is ricidulous ! I mean that in a good way !
You're one of my favorite authors still .
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I like it : ) It is also one if my fav. "Hooks"
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Who would say you can never tell the most amazing stories in just 100 words!!!
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Soopah!
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my favorite hero but it seems I've been in love with the father as much as his son.
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These are very creative stories and it's hard to believer that you can fit somuch into 100 words.
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i liked it! i believe one important mark of a good writer is having the ability to fill the imagination in tight boxes. you've accomplished that dear sir.
looking forward
paul
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Well beam me up Captain Barry! Always entertaining, unique, challenging and thought-provoking. No, I'm not talking about Barry's latest profile pic ... it's his writing. And this Drabble is anything but drab. Well done, again.
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This sounds vaguely familiar. Super writer. LOL. Of course, enter it.
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It confused me at first - had no idea where you were going.
It got clear pretty quick and ended well.
And it 'aint got no' typos or misspellings either.
Rather a plus for a change.
Hope you win something with it!!
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Thanks.
I never stop by here anymore and was alerted to your message just this morning. It's much appreciated.
I've written a novel last year and am pushing it uphill to find a publisher... it's slow going.
I know they'll have a number of "fixes" even if they accept it but each one... mehr anzeigen
Thanks.
I never stop by here anymore and was alerted to your message just this morning. It's much appreciated.
I've written a novel last year and am pushing it uphill to find a publisher... it's slow going.
I know they'll have a number of "fixes" even if they accept it but each one wants a four-month turnaround and no simultaneous submissions. That makes it a long road.
So this is very much appreciated.
I hope you're well and happy and doing satisfying work.
- Barry
Not much writing . Just some re writing . Please let me know when your novel is published .
It's good to hear that you're pursuing your craft . I'm excited !"