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I liked it. Mirrors can be creepy, and I have a feeling they can lead to other worlds too. It's a very intriguing story.

I felt possessed with the mirror thing but felt let loose with the second part of the book. There are some errors but we all have those. I liked./joeparente

PLEASE READ
I have written the beginning of a tale that is a character study tied
in to a fantastic story. I hope you read and vote if you like it./I
will do the same for those worthy./joeparente
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Comments appreciated!

The mirror thing will always give me a chill. I've seen movies where mirrors were used, but there is always room for another story. I can't seem to stay away from stories about ghosts or possession so you'll always have a good fan base. I know there are more just like me out there-- many, many more. Really, it sounds like a great start. There are problems concerning grammar and punctuation, but these are fairly easy to correct. I'm going to take the first few pages and pull up a couple of details concerning editing and pass them to you in a private message. Once these details are taken care of I think you'll be good to go.
Denna

SWEET!