Okay, so this is erotica. Is that it? Nothing about any vampires or any other beasts except sex maniacs, which seems to include them all. Okay, as erotica it is exceptionally good, fast paced and exciting. Of course you do need some editing but I am sure you realize that.
And once again I see you have redone it. I'll have to check that out.
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i swear i thought i was reading a porno man jorden is a freak hey if i had a husband and he gave it to me like that and he was big like that i would be too cant blame her cant wait to read more
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kinky, LOTs of sex, not like im complaining!lol
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kinky, LOTs of sex, not like im complaining!lol
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kinky, LOTs of sex, not like im complaining!lol
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Everybody just got right into it-lol,nothing wrong with that-smile
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omg that was good lots of detailstry and put a little more romance other than sex and ... thats it other than that it was good
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