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I Don't Try To make The Punctuation Errors. I Just Type So Fast I Don't Notice Them, Forgive Me.

I've read the first and now this one about Jordan's sex life. You need to use quotation marks. Even the worst writers use them. You also need to make sure you spell 'didn't' correctly not as 'dint'. It's a word but not in the context that you're using it.
It's fairly well written erotica... For this site. I think your covers are the best part to your ebooks

u should make another book they were all good so far so don't stop

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u have to make the stories a little long ex 16 pgs that is not enough make it longer but u have to finish the next book i luv this series. its the best!11 chao