BookRix

good poem. I do enjoy your work. I can gain inspiration as you have a similar style to how i write or like to write.

It's fine. Thank you for pointing it out for me

I'm sorry i make the same mistake

I'm sorry i make the same mistake i didn't mean anything buy it

Thank you.
Well I wrote about my panic attacks. Not very pleasant at all. I do have some love poems in my books that are very nice and cheerful. You can check them out if you want.

Such a dark...almost terrifying poem. Well done.
I would love to read something more cheerful by you next time.
Laz

you're right. sorry. actually I wanted to say "make it" and probably my finger slipped and I didn't catch it when I re-read it. you know...L is next to K on the keyboard. :P

Don't you mean mail it instead of male it not to be rude but male is different from mail .sometimes when it is done fast it can be as good as when it's planed out

I admit i rushed this poem a bit to male it in time for the competition but I am happy with it.
I am so happy you liked Torn. I wanted it to have a twist in the end, not to make it too predictable.

Ah a little different but still good and you did it in black words instead of red. hmm like your book torn just when you think you know what is happening you change it