Please update I love this book
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Like your book very much please update fast i can't wait long.
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Veru interesting,waiting to see what happens next :) update soon
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I really like it! Update??? LOL :)
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soon
wow just noticed i have already read this book but forgot to favorite it, i love the concept and plot of it the characters sound good so far the only feedback i would give it WRITE MORE!!!!!!
IsaBaby <3
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Like the new chapter but its a tease please let me know when theres more cant wait to see how Jake explains himself
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Wow! I haven't really ever liked books with "mates" and things, but this is really well written. The only thing I would say is that you need to work on capitalization. In a lot of the sentences, the name "Ash" is not capitalized. It is a proper noun, so it needs to be capitalized.
You also need to work on punctuation. There are some spots where you need to put a comma or a period. For instance. on the second page: "Now what... mehr anzeigen
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Yeah, we all have those. Don't worry.
ok they will get better though
Okay
Great job loved chapter 3 :) can't wait for the next chapter !
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i updated another chapter hope you like it