from pet to lover(on hold sorry)

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from pet to lover(on hold sorry)
luna falone is the freak of her school. no one like her especially her crush on jake the schools football captain. her only friend is her wolf ash. she just turned 17 and she is attacked by a horrible creature. she is saved but is now in somthing tht cant go back. when her schools art club and football team and the cheerleaders take a camping trip thing start to become wierd. the mean girl is the same but jake starts to acknoledge her and her wolf shows up unexpectedly.

she explores the woods only to see her wolf shift into jake. what is she to do now? why is jake starting to call her his mate? what happens wen the rest of jakes pack meets her? one last question is if she will survive the rouge wolf attacks

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jemi

Veru interesting,waiting to see what happens next :) update soon

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An-Isa

wow just noticed i have already read this book but forgot to favorite it, i love the concept and plot of it the characters sound good so far the only feedback i would give it WRITE MORE!!!!!!
IsaBaby <3

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gresensmj25

Like the new chapter but its a tease please let me know when theres more cant wait to see how Jake explains himself

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E.K. Perkins

Wow! I haven't really ever liked books with "mates" and things, but this is really well written. The only thing I would say is that you need to work on capitalization. In a lot of the sentences, the name "Ash" is not capitalized. It is a proper noun, so it needs to be capitalized.
You also need to work on punctuation. There are some spots where you need to put a comma or a period. For instance. on the second page: "Now what... mehr anzeigen

E.K. Perkins

Yeah, we all have those. Don't worry.

silvermoon

ok they will get better though

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ivymarie15

Great job loved chapter 3 :) can't wait for the next chapter !

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silvermoon

i updated another chapter hope you like it

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