Time Twins

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Time Twins
Two twins wake up in an unknown place with no memory or recollection of their past.

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time travel
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monkswalk

Not too bad though bearing in mind these are students in yr7,8 who wrote a collaborative story in just 6 hours. From planning to writing and a quick edit. Thanks for your comments though it means a log to the kids!! Mr L

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theimprobableone000

Great job, but we probably should have checked continuity before publishing. They get mugged despite waking up with nothing, get yelled at for dressing weirdly despite gaining complete Tudor dress, and there were a few other issues as well...

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William S. Taylor

I read the first page.

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