Hahaha nice one!
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Erm...I am one of the kids...
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Not too bad though bearing in mind these are students in yr7,8 who wrote a collaborative story in just 6 hours. From planning to writing and a quick edit. Thanks for your comments though it means a log to the kids!! Mr L
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Great job, but we probably should have checked continuity before publishing. They get mugged despite waking up with nothing, get yelled at for dressing weirdly despite gaining complete Tudor dress, and there were a few other issues as well...
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I read the first page.
Pacy and stylish: well done students!
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So far its good I'll read the rest later
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