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Nice and amazing book!
Good imagination and work of thought!
Love the plot and story so far!
Hope you write more and the story needs editing as there are a lot grammar mistakes and all!
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Great so far..hope you carry on :)
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u need to edit a lot!!!!lots of spelling error nd needs more collaboration.......maybe u can start with explaining feeling!
btw good start nd hope u to carry on!
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its a good start addo.................carry on nd update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ok
ok
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Ok