BookRix

You're getting pretty good at this writing thing.

Good story(s). Keep it up!

Nicely pieced together.

First off, I love how you did the cover, even if I've seen it before ;) Well done!

And the drabbles are cool. Very interesting.

The first is intriguing. It's like reading someones journal! Loved it :) I just hope all the others connect to it.

The second seems to connect but is a bit strange. I can, however, feel the irritated drowsiness of the man and his exhausting work.

The third drabble makes little sense to me. I understand it, but it's confusing.

If all theses drabbles connect, I suggest you to make it obvious that they do. Otherwise, you should make sure each story is distinct and its own. I want to feel as if I've completed something when I finish reading.

Overall, it was really cool. I felt as if I was in a dark alleyway the whole time, trying to evade the bad guys.

Great job! They were fun to read!
Keep Writing!

---RbG

You work for Lockjaw now. He was the bully when you were young, and now you are getting even by letting the arson investigators know what he is up to.

It is an interesting story, but I think it is not a good life lesson, as with all bullies, he will probably let you take the fall.

Nice life that guy leads. You used your 100 words to make 3 very interesting stories.

I am sure it is "me" and not "you" -- I really liked these three interconnected drabbles. I liked them a lot. However, I was not really certain I totally understood the final one. You left an "s" off the word "house" -- and I don't know what "accelerants" are or what you intended to do in the houses (rob them?) - and what this had to do with bullies.

Again - I am sure a minor explanation will clear it all up for me (please message me) -- and I hope you do, because these were very well written, and I'd really like to figure out what was going on. Well done.