this so far, please continue it. I love your descriptions it brought the reader into the scene. Your words made me feel the darkness of the forest the sight of the birds, the despair of the young Willow her pain and the weight of the dirt the smell. Nicely written.
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Just added a few more bits to the story. I'll continue adding more to the story as I get the chance to write. Thanks everyone for your kind comments and hearts.
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I love what you have so far! Please write more soon, its really good.
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