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Very erotic and pleasing, it is most easily understood. Not withstanding that though it is filled with errors that detract form the flow of the story. If you want to write in English it would be wise to seek an English speaking editor to go over your work. I am sure you used the spell checker but sentence structure and usage of the words is poor. You have not even delineated the paragraph structure for narration. However, I liked it. You have talent and should keep writing. Thank you for sharing your novel with me.