The Fairy Echantress

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mimibro
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The Fairy Echantress
About a young fairy princess who believes her life has no adventure and is boring. So she ends up running away from her loving home to look for fun. Princess Willow ended up in a danger unknown to any men...in a strange kingdom called Chicago, where she meets five strangely dressed people.They all plan to risk all they got to get her back home before the time runs out and she becomes stone forever.
Willow had all that time to make new friends and fall for the perfect guy, now it will take all her powers and the help of her new friends to get her home. Especially with a mysterious serial killer that wants to put her up for display and get money for capturing a fairy.

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  • Veröffentlichung: 10.12.2010
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lazarus67
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lazarus67

Storywise, it's interesting... I like the characters ...frog, unicorn and the bored, sassy young girl. The story has many possibilities.
The spelling is not bad, but the grammar needs a lot of improvement. I would suggest that you get somebody to proof read. I do the same, as do just about all good writers.
Keep at it.
Laz

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