The Fragments of Olivia

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The Fragments of Olivia
Seven years for the world to end. Olivia is broken & a new star is born...

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Fragments, of, Olivia, Miguel, Mendaro
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Gelöschter User

Just saw that this got featured on the front page. Great! The cover art is amazing. You deserve all your success, Miguel--you're an inspiration to us all.

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paigertorres

LOVE this story. The metaphors and depth of it are amazing. You are a very talented author.

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lillianthereader

I am speechless as to what to say. This book was creative, amazingly written, and full of talent. Please continue to write. I love your style. This captivated me. Thank you so much for sharing this glory.

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revueme

Ooooops! You are right! Will correct it ASAP. Thanks for reading! XD

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peterpiper

You’ve written a romantic prose; the words you used were expressive of the narrator’s affection. Your style of using futuristic dates was good. But I think you have one typo error in page 4 – should be “and” and not “an” (. . . one hundred and thirty years ago.) Just for your review. My overall rating – you have an excellent story concept and style of writing. Awesome!

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Gelöschter User

That is incredible. Very well written and original. Loved it!

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blackbeard

Miguel,

Everything that I wanted to say has already been said. Original and from the heart. The star I'm about give you I've named Olivia. I've also given you my vote

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