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I notice previous comments are 2 years old. I hope I start a trend line of new comments that support this author.

C28 is a very compelling read throughout. If you want to put a person between a rock and a hard place this author does that very nicely with a writing style that slowly builds fear and anguish in a sub plot character when she is confronted with the true evil of the stories antagonist.

The end of each chapter brings the reader to a cliff hanger moment, and a personal challenge as to whether to turn off the night stand lamp, or continue on to the next chapter.

This is a wonderful start. I'm totally hooked. Please continue!

You have a new fan. Please continue when you can. It's a fascinating beginning and it will be hard waiting to see what you do with it.

I can't wait for the next chapter. This story was quite intriguing. :)

I am hooked. The possibilities about where this story will take us are endless Forgive the comparison, but when I first read it I thought back to "Somewhere in Time"...the two characters in that marvelous movie, trapped in different eras...but no doubt that is where the similarities end? At any rate, the very idea you have going is more than intriguing, plus, plus, plus...your introduction of Jack and Jewel, their particular dilemmas and first meeting, was excellent; done perfectly. I'm there in the scene(s) fully! I also know how hard you worked to get it exactly right, and it shows:)

I must also mention the cover: FIRST CLASS. Perfect as well!

Bring on Chapter 2!

This story is one I will hang on to...though I need more. Michelle, you have a huge hit on your hands here and I am a big fan. What happenes next? The anticipation is killing me.

Everyone needs to read this, it is magical.

Thanks for the hearts and encouragement. These characters are pretty special to me. I've thought about the "what if" factor ever since I found a 1917 yearbook. I hope you'll continue to follow Jewel and Jack's story.

Michelle, I am a big fan of the notion of how people from different eras would interact with one another, and your first chapter seems to be heading us in this direction. The opening gambit is gripping, and has raised so many questions about 'where to from here?' that I hope the next chapter is almost ready to be posted. Setting the story in a Victorian environment makes it all the more intriguing. Your prose is good, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter in the saga.

Okay, that is one whopper of an opening. Wonderfully written, so descriptive I could literally see the house, almost feel it. And the characters...I could feel the apprehension, the doubt, the wonder and bafflement. Can't wait for the next chapter.