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I liked it a lot! You got an interesting premise. It needs some editing work, and check your continuity, but you got a very compelling story. I'll like to read more.
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Hathore
Okay, I'll work on that. I wasn't really feeling the flow in the beginning. I'm going to continue. I just read believe, I really liked it. You've toy me glued to my computer, I haven't made dinner yet lol!
Glynis Rankin
Please continue, you got a story worth working on. It has a strong base and you will develop your voice. Girl stop reading and go cook! LOL!
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I haven't been able to finish it but it is a pretty good start. I will finish it later. :D
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Hathore
Thanx!!
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Good, I'm so glad. I'm writing more ...stay tuned :)
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