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Third page:
You opened for us the subconscious of a near death person. Even at the last moments of life, and after accepting the inevitable end. Hope stays, beyond any expectations, the most powerful manifesting tool of the survival instinct. That was a brief, yet, a deep investigating journey inside the mind.
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Your descriptions put us, without any warning, inside your story. I almost felt myself telling the story instead of reading it. Especially, when well using the first person POV effect, as you've successfully done.
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The first paragraph is a great opening, well written, and a real hook .
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Thank you :)
You paint a vivid picture with your words. very well done, I may not sleep well tonight.
I liked the trailer for the film as well. let us know when the full picture comes out and where we can get it.
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Thank you for the very kind words. I truly appreciate them.
And I definitely will post a link for the film. I'm very excited to see the final product
Well, in those five short pages you piqued my interest. This isn't Flash, is it? Anyway, great job; great introduction of your writing here!
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Totally see it and agree.
I've sent you a couple of inbox messages responding to yours. I'm not sure if you are receiving them as they don't appear on my screen after I send them.
Did:)
Very well said.