BookRix

Creepy. Loved it though! It has such a nice flow.

Very nice.

But REALLY GOOD! Executed perfectly!

I love it! It literally gave me spooky chills.

Amazing, as are all your stories. :) I love the eerie feel of it. Voted!
~L

Brilliant story - short but ever so intruiging. I look forward to reading more of your works

I like the story. I don't think it's completely original. In fact it has been known to happen in real life, or so I have read. Nice to put it into a story though and i think you drummed up enough eeriness to slap us around the chops with it.

I don't think the cover does you any favours, by the way. When you click on it, it's all blurry. Saying that you've got lots of votes, so clearly they are readers of great quality that they can get past the presentation and judge the writing by its own merit.

Oops. Sorry I have just found out that Laz did it for you. Sorry Laz...it's a good picture but why is it blurry?

Right then. Decision...Voted. Despite the fact that i am putting my own position in the contest at peril.

Good luck
Wendy

Truly, your story gave me the chills towards the end, but in a good way! I love reading these kinds of stories for the suspense and the imminent danger (that the characters go through... I'd much rather stay safe at home ^^;). This was wonderfully written and I encourage you to really continue writing~! ^^

Harmless ghosts using the phones... interesting! You got my vote.

In the line, "But inside the small one-story ranch......." I think the word "one-story" should be as "one-storey" Just my opinion.

Thanks so much, everyone. I appreciate your great comments, hearts and votes very much.