beginning shall be the end. Such a lovely story and to capture the emotions in such few words takes talent.
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What a wonderful story! Your writing is perfect. The story captured me from beginning to end. Well done.
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Awww! You just made my day, Carol, with your wonderful comments. It lifts my spirits to know that someone else was touched by a story that I wrote. Kalai, I appreciate your lovely comments, too. You're right, love can be sheer bliss when its true.
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What a wonderful plot line, it brought tears to my eyes. Getting emotional over a story is the sign of really good writing.
You have captured the mood and feelings of Clarice perfectly. The caring attitude of Bonnie shines through and wouldn’t it be great if there were more like her.
If only that happy conclusion could be true for all the lost and lonely people in the world. A beautiful story, well told.
Carol x
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It is 100% true and the bliss of love is same forever in everyone's life. Enjoyed feeling the bliss of love in this story.
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