Very well done, nice story line and well presented.
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Yoooo this story is maddd , I love it ( The suspense at the end was worth it and i knew it was that stupid detective but was also suspecting the janitor ,, Keep it up
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Spoiler Alert!
Somehow I knew it wasn't Dennis, and like tj, I had my suspicions:)
Nice writing with an erotic edge to it.
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Thank you, Pat. I appreciate your thoughts on this story. I will be reading more of your work, too.
Melissa: Loved it. You are totally awesome. Reading your books today. When you first introduced Bowers, I had an inkling he was the bad guy....
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Originally it was going to be Dennis. But half-way through the story, I changed it to Bowers. Lol!
YEAH !!!!!!
I love your stories. This one is right up there with all the rest!! Great work! I didn't want it to end.
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It´s very exciting ^^
I like it
Hope u will continue the book.
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Thank you so much everyone for the stars and super comments. I am deeply touched by your thoughts.
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There could've have been a little more suspense, but it was a good story and I enjoyed. Can't wait to read your next one!
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That was a great book. I couldnt stop reading it. Towards the end I knew it had to be him! I just had that feeling. Hope you write more stories.
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Thank you so much.