My Sister's Murder

Beware of the evil which lurks about Von:
My Sister's Murder

This tale told in diary format involves two lovely, young sisters who have a mental connection to one another. When one of them is killed, she uses telepathy to make contact from beyond the grave. This helps the other sister to solve her murder and to avoid a similar fate.


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blekpen13

This was a great short story. I figured out who it was when the murderer was mentioned in the sister's diary about him being there for dinner. It flowed really well. You've got my vote.

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eruscupcake

I really enjoyed your diary entry. It was a great story line. I had no clue who the murderer was till the end. Wow, Great writing. Look forward to reading more.

Eruscupcake

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Susie Q Whitmer

This was a great story that kept me on the edge of my seat. I also liked the fact that you dedicated this to the victims of sexual abuse. I applaud you for that, and you got my vote :)

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Rgabel

You did well in capturing the emotional roller coaster, the questions. Good job. Voted. Robynn

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mysterywriter723

Thanks so much everyone for your great comments and votes. I appreciate your thoughts. God bless you, guys and gals!

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