Okay Melissa, you little tease. Not much to read in your reading samples, so i guess I will have to break down and buy some of your books. You are a bad, bad girl.
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Okay, you got me! hahaha, I loved that ending. Nicely done, Melissa
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Nicely written and edited. You managed a complete story in an 800-word flash fiction piece, no easy feat. Good work.
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NOT BAD FOR A SMALL BOOK
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Yeah,
The ghosts had the last laugh.
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Melissa,
I enjoyed this scary story that you have written. What an awesome unexpected ending.
Great writing!
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Cute, concise, and very well-written. And the ending - perfect!
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Impressive twist. HA that was great.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. I can't help but chuckle when I think of the ending. Lol!
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and the ending was a great surprise.
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Oh, goodie! I hope you will consider checking them out. Thanks.
Your goodies are worth checking, my dear. Ooops sounds like I'm the wolf.