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I like the word "peroxide vixens". Good job on mocking them!

This should be much higher on the ratings. I loved it and voted for you. I hope you expand it and take it to novel length. Very imaginative! Thank you.

That is awesome I loved it!

I love it :) too clever

what a great story! i hope you had as much fun writting it as i had reading it!

I'm impressed. This was a great story...very imaginative.

It's a premise I'm working on expanding, and thoroughly enjoy creating. I don't think I've ever had this much fun working on a project! And thank you for the kind words - you put a huge smile on my face!

How intriguing with the use of drink names. Really kept my interest. Good luck!

Thank you for participating in our short story writing contest "Rain Stories".

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