Wichtiger Beitrag
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Good job writing that up! Tip though, in prompt one, instead of saying "Back then I thought you didn't deserved me," say it the other way around, "I didn't deserve you," until you read on that leaves the impression that HE thinks he's too good for HER, instead of her being to good for him.
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oh crap! thanks so much! oh and thanks for reading it! as far as i know, your the first.
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Wow! youve read almost everything! Thanks! Yeah, Im not done with Kvistr. I leave a note at the end of completed books, so if the notes absent then the book is a... mehr anzeigen
oh crap! thanks so much! oh and thanks for reading it! as far as i know, your the first.
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Wow! youve read almost everything! Thanks! Yeah, Im not done with Kvistr. I leave a note at the end of completed books, so if the notes absent then the book is a WIP. But im glad you liked it! and im taking a break from Kvistr. Ive rewritten the upcoming section 3 times and that kinda ruins it, you know?
What did you think of Raven? I dont think you left a comment on that one.
No, I try and comment on more completed ones so that I have a better idea of what it is, but your off to a great start, looking forward to the rest!
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