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Yay, a comment!! Kvistr isn't done yet so Book two (Adurna) won't be in the works for a while. But I do plan on continuing at some point. Right now I'm going to be revising what I have of Kvistr so far, fix all of those grammar mistakes and lengthen the chapters without fixing the day to day stuff. Once that's done then I'll continue writing and eventually move on to Adurna.

Uhm, as to you proofreading, I'd really appreciate the help more with expanding the chapters. I can find grammar and spelling mistakes easily enough (i have no idea how they got into the manuscript! I checked them like a million times!) but I need help with plot and character development. Would you mind helping me with that instead? In return, I'd list you as a Beta (a Helper basically) in the dedication section.

Sure, lol, that sounds great! I will try to do my best to help you with your books! , I actually appreciate you even commenting back :P

great! :) okay, im gonna send you a message so we can continue this via inbox rather than a comment thread.

lol ok

I do type pretty fast, so the same misspellings happen often. but thats what spell check is for!
im really glad you enjoyed it. Im having such fun writing this!! but im currently working on my Fairy Tail fanfic so you should check that one out. Chapter one is done for now, and im working on chapter two now. im just waiting for my beta to get the rest of her critiques to me. after that i'll revise and keep sending her new drafts until she says its done, then i'll add the chapter.
once i've finished the book, i'll go back through each chapter and revise AGAIN using the techniques in a book i bought a while ago. THEN itll be done. anyway, it promises to be a grand adventure and im really looking forward to it, so you should read it! since you liked Kvistr, im sure you'll enjoy Fairy Tail: Dawn of Change!

Even though elves dont hunt, traders still come through Ellesmera so they are ale to buy the hides. plus, animal hide pants are more fashionable than fabric. Its also tougher so its better for Rider training. Sorry, did i not explain?

no x3 It's okay though

great! Oh, and I have an Inheritance Cycle group. You shoul join! its been inactive ever since I created it, but you should still join!

.3. Im surprised I remember the amount of eggs but not the amount of Eldunari .3.

i dont remember either number. all i remember was it was a shit-ton. eragon doesnt have to worry about lost knowledge because of the eldunari, and saphira isnt pressured to breed because of the eggs. its an ideal situation.

.3. yerp (yes) :3

Yesssss! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Ah, I am not a fan fix girl, I can do them in my head, but as soon as I try to put it on paper, everything goes blank. I am trying to get certain fan fics work, and it is taking forever for me.

Same here

i wish i could be detaled as you i have bad explaining my imagination since most of it doesnt make sense to me

thanks! I'm glad you think so. I try to be as descriptive as possible but i can forget to imagine character's thoughts and impressions unless I can hear their voice. See, i don' see the book as a bunch of words. At first, that IS what I see, but pretty soon the book becomes a movie I see in my mind just as I would see a movie with my eyes. When I write, its the same thing except I'm writing down what I see. And i often forget to explain my train of thought. Like, for instance, if I put something like 'Braka du vinyali sem huldr Faolan un eka', I automatically translate it to 'Reduce the magic that holds Faolan and me' so I don't put the translation, because i know what i'm saying, but I forget most of my readers don't try to learn the ancient language inside and out like I do so they still need the translation. Also, I have a hard time being realistic and being consistent with character personalities. So while I have good plot ideas and the imagery to pull it off, I still have a lot of learning to do.

Oh, right. thanks, nala!