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lol...that was extreme..poor little guy

The ending was so funny! I honestly did laugh and nice twist there! Did not expect the murder to be... you know... I don't want to give it away, but yeah! I enjoyed it!

Great writing! But you brought up the traumatic memory of losing my pet hamster during a move from the U.S. to Canada. Sob...

Thank you parisjohn! I did it for the contest, it was so much fun.

it was good but you should have put in pictures because its hard to tell who's talking

One of the really good ones. I loved it...especially the surprise ending. Way to go!!

To writingmum, it's a pleasure and an honor that you enjoyed it. The fact that you have also joined the talented writers in this place like Serena, Patrick, Lazarus, Stevie, Tom to name a few, and took the time to comment just warms my heart. Thank you!

Your comments as always bring a smile to my face. Thank you Pat!

Thank you for the comment Serena. Glad I had you going ;)

"I just read Liar Liar and...well...
No, no. I won't give away the ending.
Well of course I liked it!
Uh-huh. Uh-huh...
Oh now, look here!...
Oh, I wouldn't say that, it's more like Hitchcock than...
CERTAINLY I'll tell my friends...
Now, calm down.
Hello?
Hello?"
:)